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    Website Review Request

    Could you please review our new design? http://www.advancedwebranking.com
    made by Caphyon LLC
    Thank you!

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    In terms of design/layout, I like it a lot, it is clean cut, and very very fresh - just how I like things.

    However, there is a lot to be said regarding your code. It is not good at all.

    Few pointers:

    1. You are missing a DOC-Type.
    2. All values should be held within quotation marks, e.g. var="value". There are a lot missing in your page.
    3. You have used tables for your layout when there is no need to have used them.
    4. Code structure is pretty good, near inline, and nested, but not perfect.
    5. You use a lot of deprecated tags, e.g. the height attribute in the <td> tags, the align attribute, the <b> tags, etc.

    Simply, your work is good, but your code lacks greatly, and you do need to imprive. The previous are just a small number of issues that are present in your code. I have yet to check your CSS source code.

    Pay heavy attention to the topics in the HTML & CSS forum, and make sure you visit www.w3schools.com, and www.w3c.org regularly.

    You could shrink your source code vastly if you get up to date with code techniques.

    Otherwise, nicely done.


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    Ionsurge mentioned most of the code problems, but in terms of the design, it's a bit pastely; you could do with more contrast.
    David House - Perfect is achieved, not when there is nothing left to add, but when there is nothing left to take away. (Antoine de St. Exupery).
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    Thanks!

    I am a little bet sad but it is a lesson for me. I am the designer of the site and i like to work with pastel color, i made the html and css too
    i wont more opinions on this site i hope to improve his image.

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    Another one for review

    I made the desing of the Caphyon http://www.caphyon.com/
    Please tell me what you think of this one!

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    Again, it's a nice design, but consider those people with partial sight - even a dark grey may be illegible against a white background to them. You should nearly always use black on white or white on black for body text.
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    You should really have posted that as a new thread.


    Addition: The same comments apply to the caphyon design also.
    Last edited by ionsurge; 04-15-2004 at 10:51 AM.
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