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    Site Review please

    I have a site and would welcome any comments, does the English make sense and does it look right. www.puddypaws.co.uk, is there anything else I could add to it. thanks

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    Quote Originally Posted by quartzy View Post
    I have a site and would welcome any comments, does the English make sense and does it look right. www.puddypaws.co.uk, is there anything else I could add to it. thanks
    have a validation problem( easy to fix):
    http://validator.w3.org/check?verbos...k%2Findex.html

    i like the site,

    best regards

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    Taken the liberty of proofing some of your copy.

    Welcome to PuddyPaws

    I first owned a cat at 21 years old and found a new love in them; now I have 35 years of experience looking after cats. I love all animals, and I believe we should all respect and be kind to every creature, not just cats.

    What first led me to start this service was the difficulty I encountered trying to get a sitter when I was away. I started this cat sitting service where I can meet my feline friends every day. It is a pleasure to meet many different kinds of cats, all of whom [note: it sounds better to personify as you love them so much] are unique.


    Meggie, one of my cats, looking contentedly at having her photo taken.

    We all know [note: inclusiveness is a classic advertising technique] that cats love to be in their own environment; there really is no place like home for a cat! So instead of high pet boarding fees, consider PuddyPaws, a cat sitting service, where your pet will have all its needs catered for with the bonus of being at home with familiar smells and sounds.

    As a person sensitive to your cats' needs and with your help in letting me know his or her quirks and routines, I offer a reliable, dedicated, responsible and affordable local service.
    Grammar errors in bold, style underlined.
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    Not bad, the site definitely accomplishes what you're trying to and gets the point across.

    My main gripe would probably be the text wall on the front page. It's a bit intimidating (surprising for a cat website). Maybe to spice it up a bit add an image in place of "Christine" that is in a Signature Font.

    Extra points would've been given for an animated rotating cat head.

    Oh yeah, and you also have some misspelling on your Cat Trivia page under Disclaimer:
    These links of advertisements and articles are just inks,...
    Unless otherwise stated, any code posted is most likely untested and may contain syntax errors.
    My posts, comments, code, and suggestions reflect only my personal views.
    Web Portfolio and Code Snippets: http://shanechism.com


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