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    This is kind of a quote?

    i just finished the rough draft of my new site. and i just will be showing some screen shots because its not on the internet yet. but i just want to see what people think of it. its suppose to be a professional website so tell me how i did !!



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    honestly, it looks OK. needs a more web 2.0 look to it

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    First, get rid of that random bullet point. Also, it's a little bland. It needs some pizzazz.

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    It's a good start, but could use a lot of work.

    Try to include a little more contrast on your homepage. Don't ever center align all the text. Include a title (can be centered or not, your choice), and then include the content below in a smaller font. Try to split it up into smaller sections so it's easier to skim (like my post here).

    In your second screenshot, you can see that the left side doesn't all line up properly (the header, nav, and "special offers" section)

    The 2 curves below the header image look very awkward, I would suggest retouching those.

    EDIT: I was going to post more, but then I realized this was over a month old and probably not worth the time. :S

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    Moved to site reviews


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